Marking criteria
10• Writes effectively and appropriately for the audience, purpose and context of the task
• Manipulates language structures authentically and creatively relevant to the task
• Sequences and structures ideas and information coherently and effectively
8–9• Writes with a good understanding of the audience, purpose and context of the task
• Demonstrates an excellent understanding of language structures relevant to the task
• Sequences and structures ideas and information effectively
6–7• Writes with an understanding of the audience, purpose and context of the task
• Demonstrates a good understanding of language structures relevant to the task
• Organises some information and ideas
4–5• Presents some information, opinions or ideas relevant to the task
• Demonstrates a rudimentary understanding of vocabulary and sentence structures
• Attempts to organise information and ideas
2–3• Attempts to address the requirements of the task
• Uses single words, set formulae and unrelated sentences to express information
1• Produces some comprehensible language relevant to the task
Model answer
六月二十一日 星期日 天气:晴
上个星期,我去一家医院做了一周的工作体验,因为我一直对当医生这份工作很感兴趣。这是我第一次真正了解医生的日常工作。
第一天,我有点紧张,但是医院里的医生和护士都很热情,耐心地教我很多东西。我看到医生们要看很多病人,跟他们解释病情,还要写很多报告。工作虽然忙,但是大家都很专心。
最让我感动的是,一位医生帮一个生病的小孩做检查,然后笑着告诉他“很快就会好”。那一刻,我感觉医生这份工作不只是治病,更是给病人和家人希望。
通过这一个星期,我更确定将来想当医生。古人说"有志者事竟成"——只要心里有这个目标,并认真努力,就一定能实现。我要好好学习理科,希望大学能学医,将来做对社会有用的人!